I signed up to participate in the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog challenge, and the first task is to develop an elevator pitch for this blog.
Here it goes!
UPDATED ON 4/7/2009 at 8 AM:
Cryns.com is my band’s website and blog. It features:
- guitar lessons
- video journals
- daily blog entries
- responses to questions and comments
- free mp3 downloads
- tour photos
- tour dates
- It provides a variety of ways for me to connect with you.
This website is the FIRST place that my MP3s are released and that news is announced. If you want to stay on top of all the exciting stuff going on around my band, then you need to visit Cryns.com.
UPDATED ON 4/6/2009 at 10:20 AM: Cryns.com is where I go to connect with friends and fans of my music. I share updates about my musical journey, and friends & fans share their ideas and thoughts in return. It features guitar lessons, video journals, daily blog entries, free downloads, and also tour photos. Basically, it gives us all an excuse to get together and share ideas online.
Cryns.com is a place where friends and fans of my music go to get updates about where my musical journey has taken me. It features guitar lessons, video journals, daily blog entries, free downloads, and also tour photos. AND it also provides an avenue for me to get to stay in touch with friends and fans via blog comments and emails. Basically, it gives us all an excuse to get together online.
What do you think? How would you improve it?